The Tempting of Neely J: Chapter Nine – Counsel from the Devil

"Neely seeks advice from an unlikely source."

 26/06/10  11:26 GMTCarlotta—Right. Couple of developments since yesterday, both mildly problematic. Work is required on more than one front. Well, it keeps a guy focused.Neely called earlier, trying hard to sound calm and measured, but most definitely frayed underneath. I’m guessing...

The Tempting of Neely J: Chapter Eight – Betrayal

"Neely's world is rocked by a shocking discovery."

Neely forgot Jasmine’s personality-glitch as her own clouds of moral confusion returned to hover over her all the way to the café. She threw herself into work, chattering to customers as distraction from a swarm of thoughts which buzzed like...

The Tempting of Neely J: Chapter Seven – Jasmine’s Secret

"Has Ray fucked up his chance of nailing Neely?"

24/06/10  23:12 GMTCarlotta, let me explain.Fucking roommate Jasmine was not part of the plan. Obviously. It happened spontaneously, explosively, as these things do with girls who don’t have Neely’s kind of scruples. And are inebriate.I went around there spur-of-the-moment. I’d dealt...

The Lodger Part One

"What had she let herself in for?"

OK, so let’s set the scene. It’s a dark road due to some rain pouring down. This is typical for this time of year. It is dry for now. The next best guess was how long that would last.A middle-aged...

The Tempting of Neely J: Chapter Six – Happy Return

"Neely has one hell of a birthday surprise."

The drums continued to thunder and fireworks lit up the night sky, as Lucas and Paulo led Sapphire hand in hand away from the crowd. Her head was spinning from the cachaca she had drunk. Its taste was still sweet in her...

The Tempting of Neely J: Chapter Five – The Fallen One

"On her birthday Neely has an unexpected and embarrassing encounter..."

19/06/10  21:02 GMTOkay, Carlotta, call this past week consolidation. Sexual chemistry was acknowledged on both sides, but our girl almost ran scared as a result, so it’s been necessary to calm things down. Even if it’s meant my taking part in...

The Tempting of Neely J: Chapter Four – Date Night

"Neely feels things she's never felt before, as Ray tests her Christian boundaries."

“You seem such a great guy, Ray, and it’s really easy, really relaxing to hang out with you.” Thus had Neely attempted to initiate a serious chat over nachos in the Watershed Arts Centre’s café before they went in to...

One Stormy Night

"The storm outside and the thunder inside is luring them to break their vows. Will they give in to the temptation?"

I press my palms to my ears attempting to block the deafening noises in my head. They keep screaming your name and I don't know how to make them stop.Sitting alone in the silent room, the walls close up on...